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Crimson Sky

Shattered faces,
All unresolved.
Mysteries of darkness,
Memories that are dissolved.
Scars of anger,
With tears of blood.
You're still a stranger,
Bleeding me to a flood.
Obscure redemption,
Intentions not known.
I'm scared to fight,
Falling and all alone.
I long for eternity,
To be embraced with peace.
Seeking empty desires,
To quench my thirst and sleep.
Soulless in a desert,
Like evil hunting to prey.
What have I become,
Is it worth the price to pay?
Pure skies are shattered,
Demons torment and fly.
Like a crow in the red night,
I fly into the crimson Sky.

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    • Hope you guys like it, it took me about a day to write, as of recent events, it is exactly how I am feeling at the moment. Feed back appreciated! I know I am dark and twisty, but that is what makes me unique ;)
      • Thanks for the feedback. I also intended it to be a metaphor. I liked the idea of writing something that was real, but also related to Halloween. I guess..in a way my situation would be like falling and getting turned by a vampire. In this case it would be a physical and moral thing, in my case it would be a change in my persona, and physical appearance. Mostly referring to being attractive, etc. Thanks again :)
        • And also the vampire (being the person who caused this pain and change) that still lingers in my life somehow, and how to deal and balance that.
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