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On My Own

He loves me,
he loves me not,
I am so confused
and im mad at him a lot.
He did this to me once
he did this to me twice,
what did i do wrong
he will pay the price.
He broke up with me twice
without a good excuse,
i thought he was the one
but now we're over and through.
I'm not lookin back in the past
cause that would make things worse,
im not going another round
im not shifting in reverse.
It's time that i move on
it's time to be on my own,
im losin track of time
cause my love for him is gone.
I'm tired of shedding tears
no tears won't fall from these eyes,
nomore thinking about him
nomore giving us another try.
I'm tired of believing his lies
im tired of him playing games,
i heard he was playing me
but im not tellin him any names.
He will get whats coming to him
he's makinĀ a bad mistake,
i never thought we would be apart
but it was a choice he wanted to make.
Not only we're not together
but he also broke my heart,
he said he'll never do it
but he tored us apart.
One thing i learned fromTravis
was that he was always good at lying,
i never thought he would do this to me
but im finish with all the crying.

Comments (1)
    • You had no trouble rhyming and getting all your feelings in....that's nice. Nice poem too.....but one thing....I felt the anger and tension.....especially the horrible tension about revenge. Feel that bad feeling inside, I felt it reading your poem. You should take a step back from it....separate you from it......are you like that?? I don't think so!! People do terrible things to each other. Sometimes it's pure selfishness or ego. He had a good girl and look what he did....he screwed it up..he hurt you and really he hurt himself too. It's unfair...and what I'm going to say first seems really hard...maybe impossible: Forgive him. Don't take him back...not saying that....Don't take him back! But realize that anger you feel is itself hurting your spirit. Realize that you cared about him...it hurts. You're not a sponge for punishment. But the moment you forgive...you will release yourself from that tension and anger that will ruin you. Anyway...hope you don't mind the suggestion. Losers and cheaters eventually get their due...you don't need to worry much about that....it catches up eventually. You don't want to become like them.
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