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IF I HAD A DAUGHTER

If I could have
just one wish
I'd put a daughter
on my list

like you she'd have
a heart of gold
kind and sweet
brave and bold

Like you she'd have
and open ear
compassion, love
and little fear

Like ME I think
you'd love her too
because for a daughter
I'd settle for
no less than YOU

for my beautiful new daughter inlaw  AMANDA

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Comments (4)
    • Really sweet poem...but would read even better by taking the "I" out of the first sentence in the second stanza.
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      • ooops that was a typing error will be correcting that right now lol thanks for noticing...
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        • aaahhh so sweet lucky daugther-in-law i hope she gets to see this poem then there will be another smile in this world!
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          • I hop you get you're daughter
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