Since you left - Depression [A LoveLandia 2004 Repost]
I FOUND A VERY OLD POEM OF MINE IN LOVELANDIA ARCHIEVE TAKE A LOOK http://www.lovelandia.com/archive/003052.html
AND IT HONESTLY MADE TEARS FORM IN MY EYES FROM READING IT BECAUSE I REMEMBER THE FEELING I HAD WHEN SHE LEFT and... HOW MUCH MY POETIC STYLE HAS WITHSTAND THE TEST OF TIME AND MY CURRENT WORKS SOUNDS UMMM 5 YEARS OLD...LOL
Something must be wrong with me with all this hurt inside,
always bursting with anger - and never any pride.
Something must be wrong with me if all I do is cry,
I can't stop this pain - all I want to do is die.
Something must be wrong with me if my emotions run wild,
all this confusion does - is make me feel like a lost child.
Something must be wrong with me with all these terrible things,
always there and never gone - depression is what it brings.
Something must be wrong with me if I can't stop these thoughts,
all this pain does - is turn my stomach in knots.
Something is truly wrong with me when living without you
I think there's only one way out
except "Putting a gun to my head and blowing my brains out."
Written By Andraeahnlus Oniexerxes Legacy
Inspired By Tara McVey
P.S.-POEM IS OFFICIALLY TO BE CONTINUED - THIS SPARKED ALOT OF EMOTIONS IN ME ABOUT TARA THAT HAS CAUSED ME TO START A SECTION ENTITLED "SOMETHING MUST BE WRONG WITH YOU" - SO LOOK OUT FOR THE UPDATED "LONGER" VERSION
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Feel free to send me the updated version to my box, looking forward to reading it. Sorry to hear things are not better but then again things like that are what give us poets our passion to write Love to add you to my friends list let me know.
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- · cristal11
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i<3 this poem =] -
- · jabbo
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Very good, I like it , I felt it. Please continue on -
- · koalabear
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This is a wonderful poem. I love it. i hope things are better. keep writting you got a lot of talents!!!!-
- · The1
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In reply to koalabear
K
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thank you oh so mucho- im beyond flattered that ppl tend 2 love my...horrid poems more than my love dovey ones :)
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- · Jessica_Robyn
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i REALLY like this poem, its so creative yet simple your really talented baby, so keep your head high and just keep on doing what your doing