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Without You -- must read

Life is nomore  B'ful w'out you,
Nothing seems goin right w'out you.

Trying to go on w'out you, but
Its been so lonely w'out you.

Tears are drowning my heart w'out you,
There is sumthin dyin inside w'out you.

I Swear,
This is not what I'd wanted to,
I just dreamt perfect lyf with you.

No one can luv you the way I do,
Lyf is gonna be !ncomplete w'out you.

Nothing can change my luv for you,
I m right here waitin for you.

I ll lways there for you, cuz
Thats true, I knew, I luv you.

oNe request, Cum back if possible,
sum1 here can't live w'out you.


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  • I think My poetry is very bad. sorry to everyone. I ll never post here again. I m quitting this blog.
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    • fabulous
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      • don"t leave there is a lot of haters here they think they are better then rest! but they just show there ignorance! i think you write very good ! we are here to write what we feel and how we feel it so write how you want and tell the rest of the people if you cant be nice then do not read ! i believe all are welcome and to be yourself thats what i do!
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        • Thx buddy. feelings matters not how u spell.........................
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          • keep it up brother. i don't write often but i love to read.. so i enjoy reading this one.. so i am looking 4 more..
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