- · 15 friends
When you said "i love you"
When you said, "I love you,"
I went over the moon.
My heart sang its glory,
The stars sang in tune.
As when with a word
God brought forth light,
So with these words
You ended my night.
So with these words
You made something new:
A bond of devotion
Between me and you.
How powerful words
To shape who we are!
We ponder in silence;
Our words cross a bar.
Your words crossed a threshold
And entered the past,
Yet they have created
A world that will last.
Revised
-
- · morninglight
- ·
They say a the words of poems, even if fictional, come from somewhere in the heart. I hope your reality is as nice as your poem. -
- · lovingyou
- ·
me gusta tu poema.... ahhh y tu foto.. -
- · a1dpoet
- ·
They say beauty of character, brings beauty to words, you are beautiful all over, because your poetry is as sweet as the singing of birds...