Comment to 'A New Life.'
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  • hahahaha I see you are playing off of me...how clever is your write. Great Work! hmm this was written in 2008? hmm I posted mine in 2009...weird. Hawiia's Paridise- Part V A journey of a lifetime was on their way he was the Captain and I his first mate we set sail before the break of day into each others arms, knew it to be fate Soft-soothing music played as the backdrop completely captivated by his incredible sexy ways so in tune with his magical wonderful essence fantasying and pondering about our new day Ocean weekend Paradise Passion the winds blew us out into the emerald bay we sat back and watched the amber sunrise waves lapping the boat, watched dolphins play His tan muscles did he reveal as the hot sun stared to spill ocean breeze flowing in my hair held in a trance, if looks could kill Fleeting sensations from head to toe poured champagne, we clanged glasses in a bikini, laying on the front of the bow he quietly next to me, making erotic passes Craving to interlock as one water wave raises high passionate energy rages pounding surf and tide Enjoying the fullness of the thrill as adrenalin pushes it pulsating into completeness to the limits, we rushed it Riding the huge, white cap waves the emerald ocean winds blows wild ruptured with every penetration catastrophic, convulsions naked Knees shaking, body shivering, ocean waves soon subsides collapsing on our backs heat radiates from all sides Gasping for air, ocean breeze sea gulls flew over above searching for answers in each others eyes rushing, water waves whisper…They’re in love…