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Darkend skys
Pouring rain
Watching the fire
Lose its flame
Staring eyes
Harsh words
Meaningless love
Losing my nerve
Tears welling up
Sufficated pleads
It appears to me
That time has ceased
As water surrounds
My frail body in the sea
Filling my lungs
My soul wants to be free
Floating to the top
With eyes wide with regret
But with everything they said
What would you expect?

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    • wow that is really good.... i like how u used the your words to create a certin emotion and how i can feel that emotion when i read your poem it is amazing... keep wrghting i would love to read some more... :)
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