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  • that was the best poem I hav read in along time...that was better then one of mine
    • Hi, my name is Sandra Hawk and I from athens Ohio and I know what you are going thoughr my boy-friend promise me the same thing. He told me he was thier un'till the end and to death puts us a part he told me he love me but his words were fake and I didin't even see it but the thing is I still love why? I fon't know but what I do is that I want to find true love next time, All I want is someone to love and notice me for me. look you young and pretty live life while you can!
      • im from Adelaide South Australia, im 17 yrs old and I know what u mean. my boyfriend whom I was with for 4 years promised all that too. but he died in a car accident 9 months ago.
        • I feel u on ur poem it almost made me cry cuz it brought memories when one of my ex promised me he would neva leave me and this and that but not we arent together but yet I still love him and for some reason I cant stop lovin him

          Missing You

          You left me here, on my own Promised me Id never be alone Told me to smile and never shed a tear, How could I smile wen you aren't near Thought of you replay in my head Think about all tha things you said I feel lik dying too, Leaving the world behind for you How could you leave, you were all I had Left me frustrated and so sad You should have told me tha reason for your stress I would have shared it made it feel a little less What could compel oyu do do such a thing ? Just thinking about it makes me start crying The pain of losing you is unbearable in my heart Even tha thought of us being so far apart I couldnt go a second without you How am I supposed to go a whole life throu
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