Life is a huge void full of darkness sometimes. Hard to navigate through and to discern a purpose or a reason. I think your poem trys to say what you're feeling. There are low points in life but sometimes we may reach a dark place that is the verge of death. Always know that you can pray to God and he will hear you. His mere presence can guide you back to light and when you feel it you will breathe again. Never lose hope of finding something bright or finding your true purpose. Guess I'm saying..keep faith. Nice poem!
Thanks, this is just mostly about the possibility of there being nothing after death...I know that Christian belief says otherwise, but there's a strong possibility that there really isn't anything after death. This poem also expresses my feelings towards the cosmo's and how random and chaotic the universe is to life. I guess I'm trying to make sense of my existence, and come to terms with the void that death is itself. I also am a huge fan of Edgar Allen Poe. I wanted to write something dark like he did. :)