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  • sucks don't itr?
    • What you feel means a lot....even if it is unnoticed. Don't let it crush your tender heart. I loved this line and the way "Stare" affected the tempo of your poem and helped me to imagine the moment you described: "You can sit there Stare"
      • yeah, it was about my best friend, and he's like everything to me, i don't think he knows it though and we had a big fight and he doesn't think we're friends :( but thanks for liking my poem

        Always

        i've always been there

        just 'cause i care

        no matter the cost

        even when I'm lost

        You've always been my idol

        Not just my greatest friend

        Only now

        I still wonder how

        You can sit there

        Stare

        And ask "how are we friends?"

        How are we friends?

        You tell me.

        Looking up to see your face

        Drifting out in outerspace

        "Really, what do we have in common?"

        More than you know.

        More than you see.

        Does it even matter.

        I loved you

        But I don't think I knew you.

        But Ill always be here.

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