suicide? Dylan really? We've spoke bout this :P
no really great poem ... But did I really need to say they all ur poems r great :)
My Final Promise
I promised you my love, yet you threw it in my face. I promised you my life, yet you thought it was disgrace. I pormised to keep you close, but you decided to leave. I promised we'd be married, but you caused me to greive. I promised 'Til death do us part' but you decided to tear out my heart. I pormised a new life, for you to try and strive.
After all the promises I made, none of them were repaid. So I lay here in my bed, rewinding what you said, and wonder in my heart, why I even tried to start.
So I have one more promise, That I'll be sure to keep. I'll say "I love you" one more time, before I put myself to sleep.