Comments (5)
  • inspired by the lyrics of whispers in the dark - skillit awesome song (youtube it) :)
      • I was annoyed ... Heat of the moment kind of thing Youtube the song: whispers in the dark- skillit its awesome I might even post the lyrics on here another time :) so yh ty again 4 commenting
      • wow. thats a good wow. i cant believe how good it is :)
        • meh I was really annoyed n down so I made myself think it was all my fault n I was so annoyed that I couldn't concentrate on my work. So I sat down in physics n wrote it .. I didnt actually mean 4 ppl 2 c any of my poems but my mate posted them 4 me :S so everyones comments have really shocked me!! ty soo much 4 all ur comments :) x

        my love

        My love is a burning consuming fire,
        dont come to close and you won tget burned,
        your love's the thing that keeps me higher,
        this is the thing i have learned....
        'You dont love me since i hurt you,
        we hardly talk, nothings like it used to,
        i miss you, tho its all my fault,
        i see you and my heart comes to a hault.'
        so nows the thing you ALL need to learn,
        MY LOVE IS A BURNING COMSUMING FIRE, COME CLOSE AND YOU.WILL.BURN!!

        Category:
        Created:
        Updated:
        • 607