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  • that was vry nice i have something very simlar but yours is much better nice i like
    • Omg i got hurt so much in the past but then again im still getting hurt. I remember putting up a wall to stop the pain from coming in i never wanted anyone to get to that place were they could hurt me again and again. But i realised that it just hurt me even more. Love is only built if you trust them and that means not blocking them out of that special place. I lost a very nice guy because i wouldnt let him in that speical place and that just coursed me even more pain. You dont have to listen to what i say im just telling you my point of view since ive been in that place. But like always the poem is great just like every other one posted. xXx. ♥ Cassie

      Stoned Wall

      I have a wall you cannot see
      Because it’s deep inside of me
      It blocks my heart on every side
      And helps emotions there to hide
      You can’t reach in
      I can’t reach out
      You wonder what it’s all about
      The wall I built that you can’t see
      Results from insecurity
      Each time my tender heart was hurt
      The scars within grew worse and worse
      So stone by stone
      I built a wall
      That’s now so thick it will not fall
      Please understand that its not you
      Continue trying to break through
      I want show much to show myself
      And love from you will really help
      So bit by bit
      Chip at my wall
      Til stone by stone, it starts to fall
      I know the process will be slow
      It’s never easy to let go
      Of hurts and failures long in grounded
      Upon ones heart from years of pain
      I’m so afraid
      To let you in
      I know I might get hurt again
      I try so hard to break the wall
      But I seem to get nowhere at all
      For stone upon each stone ive attacked
      And left between them not a crack
      The only way
      To make it fall is in imperfections in the wall
      I did the best I could to build
      A perfect wall but there are still
      A few small flaws which are the key
      To breaking through the wall to me
      Please use each flaw
      To cause a crack
      To knock a stone off of the stack
      For just as stone by stone was laid
      With every hurt and every pain
      So stone by stone the wall will break
      As love replaces every ache

      Please be the one who cares enough
      To find the flaws no matter what.

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