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I promised you my love,
yet you threw it in my face.
I promised you my life,
yet you thought it was disgrace.
I pormised to keep you close,
but you decided to leave.
I promised we'd be married,
but you caused me to greive.
I promised 'Til death do us part'
but you decided to tear out my heart.
I pormised a new life,
for you to try and strive.
After all the promises I made,
none of them were repaid.
So I lay here in my bed,
rewinding what you said,
and wonder in my heart,
why I even tried to start.
So I have one more promise,
That I'll be sure to keep.
I'll say "I love you"
one more time,
before I put myself to sleep.
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- · RyanSamson177110
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Aww, I loved that one =] reminds me of this girl..[apart from the marrage bit] but yeah really Nice poem :) -
- · Patience09
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nice... reminds me of myself sometimes... -
- · Football18
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thats sad. ive felt this. but i wouldnt ever do it. like i said... two friends doing it puts you into perspective... not gonna lie and say havent thought about it, tho. -
- · DaniDG
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suicide? Dylan really? We've spoke bout this :P lol no really great poem ... But did I really need to say they all ur poems r great :)
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