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Love can be so painful
It can tear you up inside
From beggining to the end
It controls your heart and mind

At first you "fall in love"
Now, I can't speak for you
But everytime I've fallen
Something ends up black and blue

But love becomes much stronger
So you "open up your heart"
Just like a bypass surgery
Your chest is torn apart

Then love controls your mind
When It's all you think about
It kills your intuition
And leaves no room for doubt

Love will get much deeper
And although your feeling fine
When your "floating on a cloud"
Your really clouding up your mind

Love becomes addicting
And you just can't get enough
If just one day your without it
You begin to crave the stuff

When love is all around you
Your heart has a rapid beat
Your hands begin to sweat
When love sweeps you off your feet

If you ever get rejected
By the love that you have found
A knot grows in your stomach
And your world get turned around
So, don't take love for granted
If you find it, take it slow
And If love becomes too painful
You had better let it go!

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    • WOW, this was amazing.I have a boyfriend that has been out of the country for 5 months.We seemed to always have issues with his family,and something was always happening to keep him from coming home. Now,he is going to be home in 6 days.This poem reminds me of how we feel.We have been together 9 months,but what a whirl wind .... Thank you for putting your thoughts down on paper. I loved it.
      • THATS GOOD...ITS TOUCHES MY HEART...
        • oh man this really hits home for me i thought i had finally found my soul mate if there is such a thing he is gone and my heart is broken into and i don't know if i can bring myself back from this one because i am addicted to the feeling of being in love just like your poem says
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