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Im here standing alone in the dark
no where to go no where to hide
I feel empty inside
all by myself i start to cry
but no one listens no one cares
about this pain i feel inside
and my hearth is braking apart
I feel no pain, i feel no love
for what others dont even know
I try to be normal like others are
i try so hard that they just laugh
But i have change
into someone im not
All those people who laugh
they change me alot
Into someone i dont even know
and i hate what i have become...
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- · Ez22
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Thank you!! -
- · Ez22
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Thanks and yeah i did have gramatical errors because my first lenguage is spanish and english is my second that why i had too many mistakes...sorry! -
- · chulila
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who the hell cares about the grammar when....you are expressing yourself is josh going to publish you poem....be less critical...everyone on this site has done grammar errors Professor Wolski -
- · mindfactor
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Very nice poem and I ttally understand.. -
- · Darkflametailz
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again another great poem I contect with. =^_^=-
- · Ez22
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aw..thanks for your comments! i appresiate them alot!!^.^
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