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Look into my eyes
and see my pain
the mesery im suffering
is driving me insane
you never see nothing
thats under youe nose
im screaming to you
HELP ME
but you hear nothing at all
what will it take for you to see
whats happening to me
i ve tried to explain
but you dont understand
maybe its because you have
never sufferd like i am
i wish you would hold me
and tell me im fine
but i cant see that happening
not in this life time
maybe one day
ill not be here
and then you might realize
that if only you had said
"my luv you are fine"

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    • wow... that was touchy. If your going through this, then I know exactally how you feel. :(
      • When we suffer we seek a "scapegoat" and somtimes we want to lump all our hurt and bad feelings on them. Sometimes its not one thing hurting us...but many things and I know this is the case. The focus of your poem is on someone who should...but does not understand how much you are suffering inside. You wish they would see but they just don't and they are little comfort to you in your time of dispair. Try now not to be bitter toward them...because this bitterness will grow and grow and it will consume you. Now is a time to realize your blessings and I know that you have a few....you've forgotten about them. The holidays are coming soon and this time brings back many happy and sad memories from the past. You're a strong woman and a good woman, I have faith in you. Try to live in the present right now...stay busy....do something kind for someone (even someone who doesn't deserve it by your rekoning). Help to make some special memories for your young children...they will be happy if they see you smile..they love you and don't wish to see you sad. Make this particular holiday a special one for them. I have a feeling that you wil receive a sign from someone who you miss each day...that her spirit is still with you. Keep your chin up Kelly....good things will come in time and happiness will return. Why? Because I just know they will. In your dispair you've forgotten how important you are to others. Jim
        • SOMETIMES ITS NOT WHAT YOU SAY IT IS HOW YOU SAY IT! SAY THIS THING YOU WANT TO SAY TO THIS PERSON AND THEN SAY AFTER THAT THIS THING I ASK WOULD MEAN SO MUCH TO ME AND MAKE ME SO HAPPY! ARE DO THIS FOR ME AND IT WILL MAKE ME SO VERY HAPPY! AND SMILE A SMILE IS VERY POWERFUL!
          • Great Poem...Loved it. I can relate "big time".. =0)
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