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midnight

And it starts...


Sometime around midnight


Or at least that's when


I lose myself


For a minute or two


 


As I walked...


Under the barlights


And the ipod plays our song


About forgetting her for a while


And she is on my mind


A the only thing i can think of is her smile


And that dress she's wearing


I think to my self I have't seen her


For a while


 


But you know...


That she's playing


She's laughing, she's turning


She's holding her phone like a crux


The room suddenly stops..


It reminded me of the questions i used to ask.


So i can bring her smile for a while..


 


And so there's used to b change...


A change in  my emotions


And all of these memories are washing away


Like feral waves in my mind


Of the curl of her bodies


Like two perfect circles entwined


And I feel hopeless, and homeless


And lost in the haze


Of this wine


 


As i walked her memories vanished...


Under the streetlights


I may b too drunk to notice


That everyone is caring for all this


And i am the only one who knows.. that my


world is falling all


Around me....


 


 


And I know that she'd break me


In two.........

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lovingyou
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can you see it.. i hope you like it..
 
morninglight
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Made me imagine I was there. It hurts when it's like that. It's like a piece of you that you can never let go of so you never do. You try to but you can't...it just fades and softens in time and you learn not to struggle with it and look at it long...but sometimes you're reminded. I think it happens less and less as you grow older. Very nice poem!
 
butterflyrhei
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oh my gosh...
in some way i used to feel the same way too:'(
 
tornheartsneverheal
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i cant see it. :(...
im sure its beautiful though...all your work is
 


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