Hey. i think what u have down so far is good. what helps for me is to think of what it is that im feeling and try to form it into words. then i draw a picture with the words so the reader would see what was going on. these lines are a good start. you are free to express yourself in however way with your words thats what being a poet is about. I think if u look deep down u will find the proper words to put down.Just look at the lines you put. what do they mean to u? do they speak to you? most importantly will they speak to your boyfriend once he reads it? u said you and him are in a long distance relationship. go off of that. when i read the lines on here i thought that your love for him is something that cant be seen but felt through the distance between u to. it is uncotainable in a sense that u cant contain your undying emotion for him. unreachable meaning that no one can reach for it and take it away from u and irreplaceble meaning that a emotion less of that love you feel for him can be replaced. those lines have so much meaning and if u can contionue to branch off for that u will make something amazing. heres what comes to mind when i read those lines 'My love for you is uncontainable unreachable and irreplaceble" Every night I dream and everydream that is sent upon me brings me closer to you. closer until the day comes when my dreams will lead me to your front door. and we will kiss like we never met. ok thats just what i thought but i cant tell u what to wite. just write form the heart. make it have meaning to u or it will not have meaning to him. dont strive to write something unique or different. strive to unleash all your feelings for him and write it down. once u do that u might realize that u have made something unique without even trying. I hope I helped

thank you so much!

that's really good. He has a good point there. and what you wrote is good I like it.

That is fab! it speaks! Seductiveangel what you wrote is powerful! ChrisJ20 that is so strong! i really dnt know what to write about it! it blew me away!!