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i met this boy

By kellyvs
21.04.2008
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i met this boy


	this was the first poem i ever wrote I met this boy he was very nice i treated him like shit but he did nt seem to mind My mother seemed to like him my sister did to i dont know why i let him go i was a real fool All i,d like to tell him now is that i want him back but people have said he hates my guts so i guess thats the end of all that

Muhammad Shanazar

221 days ago Reply

Nice poem, we often lose the opportunities, who know when and where and in what shape and form fate may appear and may knock at our doors and we unknowing turn it away.
I think the line shoul be lke this:
"My sister did too"
Love and respects
Shanazar

pirate151

141 days ago Reply

PEOPLE SAY WHAT THEY MAY! BUT IF YOU DO NOT GO TO HIM YOUSELF YOU WILL NEVER KNOW. I TELL YOU THIS BE KIND AND REWIND.TELL HIM WHAT YOU FEEL I WOULD WANT TO KNOW.WE ALL MAKE MISTAKES DO NOT JUST LET IT GO.. BETTER TO LOVE AND LOST THEN TO HAVE WONDER EVERY DAY..

molli

95 days ago Reply

Hey i think you shunt listern 2 othr ppl..... Go and find out 4 ya self grl..... x o x

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