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i wrote your name

 

i have your name in my heart

i wrote your name in the sky, but the wind blew ti away
i wrote your name in the sand, but the waves washed it away
i wrote your name in my heart and forever it will stay
   
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egr_21
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are you familiar with a certain type of incident wherein if a person accidentally bangs his head off a thing,.--a memory loss amnesia can happen?in your first two stanzas i've noticed that you have delved deeper to the very meaning of forgetting a loved one...technically it is clearly visible and it's really amazing in the last part when you did want his memories to stay longer.
 
egr_21
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simple but realistic,that is what your poem is...very romantic and expressive at the same time.......
 
Sugababe
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short, sweet and simple but yet exactly to the point..I like it
 
cristy
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thank you for ur comments dudes
 
Candyluv
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Swt & short r de BEST wordz 2 describe diz poem... It givez me de reason 2 scratch u a lil deeper so I can more dan diz... Keep 'n touch.
 
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HI AND THANKYOU FOR ALL HE WOUNDERFUL PEOPLE THERE ARE WHO HAVE EXPERIANCED THE SAME THING!
 
kellyvs
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very sweet i love it
 
CANDY15
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thanx everyone
 
PLFG5
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i luv it
 


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