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dream... (dont poke crap, this is being PUBLISHED!!!)

i look in your eyes
as you look in mine
we see mirror images
for both of them shine.

mine shine with love
in their light shade of blue
yours shine with joy
because my love is for you

our fingers innerlace
our bodies entertwine
i hear your heartbeat
as you can hear mine.

we whisper words 
that no one can hear
of how much we care,
of how much we hold dear.

as we lay, hand in hand
i feel our bond has truly began
your lips are on mine and i feel total bliss
because you love me and prove it with a kiss.

thats when i awake from my state of sleep
your not here and i cant help but weep
...you wouldnt think god could be so mean
to make being with you only a dream.


dedication: zak :) rock on bon jovi

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tornheartsneverheal
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its seriously being published in a book...soooo--- advice?critism?(mild please)lol
 
pirate151
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That is a very nice poem ! And good for you on the publishing...
 
XjaylaX
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it's good. you probably already know you're a good writer though lol.
how did you go about getting published? did you just submit articles to magazines? i was thinking about trying that with some of my work.. i dunno.
 
tornheartsneverheal
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go to library of poetry.com
they have monthly contests you can enter and they send you a letter or email. book,not mag, and you would totally kick ass.
 
XjaylaX
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cool, thanks man!
 
tornheartsneverheal
tornheartsneverheal
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lmao,im a female,jay. :) and your truly welcome.
 
thialuvzya
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poetry.com is great. i have several that they published. you would be awesome jay, go for it!
and yes, i'm sure u already know that ur an amazing writer tornhearts, but its always nice to hear isnt it?? :-P
great poem!
 
ZackFlak
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I know all to well the feeling expressed here. Good poem. Sad subject.
 


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