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You stand alone

You stand alone,
head raised, eyes blurred
the only one fighting
fighting for a battle already lost

you strive to perfect
to engage in a miracle
extend your hand of help
to a world blinded by superficiality

they don't care

you care, because no one else does
it doesnt change the fact
that no one else cares
you plan to make a difference
but at what expense?

people die all the time
it's part of life,
you hope to stop the wars
to stop the genocide,
the murders, the homicide
the suicide,
when will it stop
when you say it will?

When will you learn?
What will it take for you to understand
that are all lost

we kill to gain
we cry to heal
we yearn to love
we act on instinct
and fail time after time

occasionally we get it right
but you stand alone...
you crave for a peace
that has long gone

time has changed
the era for healing is over
replaced by greed, money, death
accept it.

Deny it.
do whatever, but you stand alone
imagine the world as it once was
as it will no longer be that way again
we are too far advanced
we are 6 feet deep and going

You stand alone.
Face it and move on.

Written & (c) by Roselie Luafutu 2008

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Josh Wolski
Josh Wolski
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people die all the time
it's part of life,
you hope to stop the wars
to stop the genocide,
the murders, the homicide
the suicide,
when will it stop
when you say it will?

That was awsome. Out to change a world are we? What your trying to say comes over very clear in this.

This what I got from that


Tiresome I try
To bring sight to blind eyes
But They Hold up their fists
In anger and in rage

Split tongues spite
spit
grit teeth
As I cry out peace
only for them

Bring these weak and weary
To a place in heart
Strip them of what they know
and I'll reteach them how to love

A penny for a thought is to cheap
A murderer, a Million, and one walks away free

Strip them I say
Take thought away
Remember what it's like
Before war was a way

I stand beside a pinnacle of achievement
only to see in collapse within itself
Only to find myself thinking
I've wasted my time
 
Roselia
Roselia
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You know Josh, you never cease to amaze. I like your response, quite accurate. Very good! I like
 
Raconteur
Raconteur
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Excuse me fer a one sec Roselia - Hey Josh, I see yer the one who outbid me fer that verse on Ebay, Cheeky lad, I'll have yer best writin' pen fer that un I will.

Sorry Roselia,

Ahem

Right yer verse...

Aye, it's an intensly sad verse, but yer Poetic grace sort of entranced and distracted from the tragic emptiness of loss through time finding gain.

Take care,

'Anna
 
shatteredhope
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Geese, you post a lot of blogs, don't you?!
 


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