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What i want

Someday i want a house with a family
and all things to be happy but in my sleep
i can see that some day might never meet me
but as i dream and hope and prey
that hopefuly god will have his way
 and find me true love and open my heart to the
sight unseen before me 
if love is realy true maybe oneday it will be me and you

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ujjwal
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286 days ago    Reply
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extend a bit more....or wt i suggest is dnt end it up as desire and wants neva ends. end it leaving with desire for more
 
RedneckPirateRenee
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this is another good poem you so need to help me write on im having a writers block I GIVE IT A 10
 


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