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Walk with me

Guide me through the tortured fields
of blood stained blades
and deflective shields
cruise with me, through the flowing currents
of red dyed waters
and lifeless bodies
sense the awakening of evil within
fury enlarged,
engulfed by pure sin
extensive pretence
formed by others' convictions
morals lost,
putrid fantasies emitted
excessive pressure
the tactics of men
to enforce cruel intentions
to fight not defend
the death of innocence
a symbol of the end
of a message created
to spite and offend
so reflect on the lives
lost to battles worldwide
wars spurned by greed,
 territory and pride
envision the souls
of those long gone
as they fought to rid the world
with all that was wrong
hush now be silent,
lets wander still further
and imagine a world
without war, slaughter, murder
hold close the memories
and cherish those days
of laughter and happiness
as they will soon fade
distinguished is love,
in love you are free
so come take my hand
walk with me!

Written & (c) by Roselie Luafutu 2008

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John McKay Withey
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Hi Roselie,

We always hope that love conquers all but it seems to be an emotion of which politicians don't recognise or approve. I like your thoughts. John.
 
Roselia
Roselia
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Thanks John! Im really trying to improve my writing!

Hope your well.
 
Raconteur
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Guide me through the tortured fields
of blood stained blades and deflective shields
cruise with me, through the flowing currents
of red dyed waters and lifeless bodies
sense the awakening of evil within -

Err...

I don' wanna become part of the field though, hehe.

Okay, I'll knock it off

Hi yer Roselia,

Yer verse here is spot on, sort of twisted, which I like, but also Poetically beautiful.

(Yeah, I really am that bad of a reviewer again today, I dunno what the hell me problem is. Well, actually I do, but has nothing to do with why it is I am talking in parenthesis right now, because why I am doing this, I have no idea, so I am going to end me parenthesis right now.)

Nice seein' yer again, hope yer doin' alright, all's well here in hell.

'Anna
 
Roselia
Roselia
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LOL.. You have a great sense of humour. I like it! Thanks for your views, I appreciate it..Im doing great thanks, life couldn't be better! Ah hell?! i'm sure I've been there before..

Hope you're all goOd..

Take it easy..

Roselie
 


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