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UNEXPECTED

We met nexpectidly,
With no anticipation in mind,
The night went so beautifully,
And look what I find.

There's a brightness about you ,
Which is seldomly found,
With uniqueness and beauty,
And love all around.

As life is a line,
Which is so very fine,
Just to caress your lips,
Which have the sweet taste of wine .

As rare as can be,
Chemistry so elusive and free,
With all emotions just so right,
Like stars exploding into the night.

So with these words,
That I have written this day,
For you my love,
These words of praise

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Itsallinthekiss
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The last word of the first line should be unexpectidly so please forgive the typo. This was written about an unexpected amazing date.
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As rare as can be,
Chemistry so elusive and free,
With all emotions just so right,
Like stars exploding into the night.- Yer 'high', compliments of charisma and charm, are definitely felt through yer poetic grace.

Aye, such an enchanting read, it was like watching champagne crimson starbursts, and sipping subtle wine.

The afterthoughts.

Yer wrote nice of yer enchanter, real respectible like.

I'm fond of such traits.

Take care,

'Anna
 


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