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i hve no title 4 ths...its all pain.

Breeze flows by
Whispering words into my ear
Numbness grips my soul
and the Scarry heart skips a beat

The Sun setting down the prairies
Signals the end
When will you come back to me
I am shattered and broken

The Flowers have died
my tears have dried
These wounds will never heal
unless you touch me

Even in a stone
Lies a heart Soft enough to pardon
Believe me my love,
I am shattered and Broken"

say wat hurted u the most.......?
say wat made life tough for you..?
say wat broken your heart.....?
say why it happens in life that ones out of emotions......?


and see if there is some one who may have the same pain as yours....or if at that falling moment of your life you were right or wrong...!!!

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sexylady
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OMG YOU ARE SO HANDSOME
 
greeneyedgirl
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You are so very gifted with words, I would really advise you copy write your words when ever you put them down to protect your work.
 
LoveOnlyHim
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I really like how you put the words and it does look like it needs revising. But it is wonderful and I feel your pain.
 
ujjwal
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suggest sumthng 2 revise it.......
 
inulover600
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wow u seem to have a lot of heart ach i love your work but it's so sad
 
laurie567
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hey u are so hot and amazingly CUTE
 
bigcuddle
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Your words are sad but you are gifted and in pain I hope you fair well and end up happy.
 
uniqueHONEY8190
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madd cute .
i really like this
 
unwanted_love
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i dont think that he needs to revise anything its his poem and if love only him wahts to say sumthing you should tell her to write her poem
 
john-paul
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Should check out my work.
 
demonette23
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wow thats really good
 
RISITAZ0420
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SO FAR I LIKE ALL YOUR POEMS BUT THEYRE ALL SAD :( DO U ONLY WRITE WHEN UR HURT?
 


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