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Thomas

 

The fire

There is a heat in my chest
one that burns like a wild fire
And it spreads throughout my body
like flames across the plains
it cares not what it engulfs
or what it turns to ashes
it seeks the easy fuel
and begins to eat away at it
It consumes all within its path
until it reaches the end
and there it sits and waits
for another path to open
so is my heart
It was the plains the you burned
it was the easy target
and now it is the pit
no more fuel to burn
for i am empty inside
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makensie12
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ugh. lol. say what?
 
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YEAH MAN I DINT GET IT BUT IS GOOD

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i love it...i understand it perfectly....idk what these girls are talking about haha :) nicely done...
 
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OMG loved it your like the best poet ive ever liek yea met on here ,lol *no offense to the other ppls* But ur also hot or thats what my Friend Amber says shes a junior shes like 17!♥
 
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nice job i totaly agree with the girl above !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ♥ ??
 
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I loved it!
 
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thats really good!
 
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wow this is AMAZINGGGG
 


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