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- By marvelous32
- 25.09.2009
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Justpassingthrough
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 | really nice poem but you revealed more about you then you meant to when you rhymed "shit" with "it" in the last lines. I had such a laugh! It's a sweet poem other than those last lines which seemed so out of place. I think "A purity of love will come to you" makes a nice ending as it is the very point of your poem. Millions.....haha......that's a killer!!! I think that would break me.... |  | |||
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