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Loneliness

He lies awake
Circles under his eyes
As dark as the night
His happiness dissolving
In lost-love fright

His mind drifting
Waltzing with second hand
In tears, his heart drowns
The wine and the knife
The only friends around

And far, far away
There is a sound......

She lies awake
Her cries of pain
Bounce off the stars
Reopened wounds
Bruises and scars

Her mind falling
Deeply into abyss
Of mind numbing stress
In this agony
She must confess

She wont sleep
Knowing hes crying
He wont sleep
Knowing shes dying

She thanks the Lord
In these times, so rough
That her lover cant see her
In this state, not-so-tough

And in honesty
He is positively
Thanks the Lord that she wont see
The heart-wrenching tears
And sorrowful oaths
Entwined in the "Why me?" creeds

"Ill never fall in love again!"
He screams
As he puts the gun to his head
He waits for the phone
To give off the call
For the bullet and trigger
To end it all

In her death, he cant cope
Refuses to wallow and mope
In melancholy times
With suicidal attempts
The only thoughts on his mind

She draws her last breath

The phone rings

In the last moment

He suffered as much as she

For losing a love

Causes the greatest agony

Loneliness

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JLEEANN
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THAT IS AN ASOME PEOM
 
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awww dang didnt know you could write!
 
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wow kim that was rly good
 


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