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Little Girl

Little girl, who are you?

What are you doing here?

What's that you say?

To follow you?

I'm sorry, I can't, my dear.

Little Girl, why are you tugging

at my hand, you see?

You want me to go

down to the park? or maybe to the see?

I don't think I can, I must say I am sorry,

wait here! come back! you forgot your little dolly!

Little girl, little girl, where is your mum?

Where will you go? And where have you come?

I worry that you are alone, do not tell that is true

where is your house? your family? Tell me, give me a clue.

Lost little girl, go, go away

go back from where you came, go to the park to play


Please, do not worry me much anymore,

I'll be going now, just through that door.

No! Do not follow me, please little girl,

please please please don't be that way.

Little girl, little girl. Good bye, little girl.

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shatteredhope
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on the end of the 9th line I said "see" and I meant "sea" so sorry!
 
shaiiy20
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nice poem ......is this in some kind away discribes u??
 
shatteredhope
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sort of. im kinda hating myself, so, yea...LOL
 
shatteredhope
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I love that little girl, though. I can't believe how realistic that sounds to me. When I was young, of course. (When I wrote "when I was young" I was thinking of "When you were young" by the killers. LOL)
 
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VERY MOVING FULL OF FEELINGS. I LOVE IT.
 


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