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Little Girl

Littlle girl, try not to cry
he's not a monster
just confused
Little girl try not  scream
don't kid yourself
it's not abuse
Little girl don't  go and hide
he'll find you
then you'll wish you died
Little girl what's the use?
don't bother fighting
he can't lose
Little girl I see your pain
I hear your tears
I've felt that shame
don't worry girl
your time will end
then slowly, yes
your wounds will mend
Little girl I tried to save you
don't blame me please
I know i've failed you
I never thought he'd take you as well
thrust you into the fires of hell
never thought he'd go so far
to tarnish such purity
to blemish his 'star'
Little girl I don't know what's worse
that he hurt you too
or that I was first.

Written & (c) by Roselie Luafutu 2008

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One cannot simply overlook the appalling scene playing out in this verse, truly disturbing behavior, 'parental' (fergive me supposition) direction gone critically wrong.

Well written Poem though, I won't discount the creativity that has been versified here by any means, but still...

Aye, this is sad tale

I do hope yer mend well

Take care,

'Anna
 


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