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How I feel about you...

I know we have just recently met,
And I have alot i would like to say.
I'd like to share a great sunset,
If i could be with you for a day.

Your eyes are tropical rings,
Your smiles fade away any dark.
Your beauty is one of many marvelous things,
But your intellect is the greatest spark.

You have a very beautiful heart,
One that's worth any price to pay.
I hope that we may never have to part,
For with you I hope to forever stay.

Your hair is as bright as any star,
You have gone through alot in the past.
I would do anything no matter how far,
But it's amazing how much your heart could last.

I hope that in me you may trust,
That I may have a single chance.
For inside I have no lust,
Only the passionate fires of romance.

And if in me you do confide,
My best i will try to do.
There will be nothing I will hide,
For I think there's none better than you.

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Tippi123
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This is so good. I never thought a guy could write something as nice as this. : )
 
Forsaken66
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^.^ thanks. everyone I know who came to read thins liked it. so I thought it would be okay to put it up. everything that mentions in this poem is how I felt. or atleast for this one girl. but it was a mistake.
 
lindz
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hi! i really liked your poem!!! its really sweet and tender
 


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