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Forgive...

You forgive me for liking you too much,
and I'll forgive you for not liking me enough.
you forgive me for missing you so,
and I'll forgive you for being so cold.
you forgive me for the loud racing of my heart,
and I'll forgive you for not hearing it.
you forgive me for playing your games,
and I'll forgive you for toying my emotions.
you forgive me for finding you so attractive,
and I'll forgive you for not noticing.
you forgive me for raising you up so high,
and I'll forgive you for bring me down so low.
you forgive me for wanting to be with you,
and I'll forgive you for avoiding me.
you forgive me for being so pathetic,
and I'll forgive you for taking advantage of it.
you forgive me for not being to let go,
and I'll forgive you for never having latched on.
you forgive me for having hopes and dreams,
and I'll forgive you for crushing them.

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Bri918
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If only it wasnt so true...maybe then we all wouldn't get so hurt :)
Nice writing
 
aku69
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Yeah well what is there to do? Sometimes when we love someone and they don't feel the same way the best thing to do is try to understand that life doesn't always go the way we want. We can't control the way others see you or the feelings that they have for you so the best we can do is understand them and forgive them because it's really not their fault. Thank you for taking your time to read it and for your comment.
 
pink_sj
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this is really good..really deep and so true i felt alot wen i read this..its from the heart and its brilliant!!
 
aku69
aku69
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thank you. I'm glad you liked it. =]
 
Kalin
Kalin
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I Like This Alot
The Feelings In It Is Magnificent
You Have A Talent
And I Hope You Write More Like This
Ill Keep In Touch
 
aku69
aku69
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Thank you for taking your time to read it. Im glad that you enjoyed it. I'll try my best to come up with more.
 
jhoyang
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its the best!!!!
it touches my heart as well as my soul...
 


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