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Falling

Inhaling the ash from dreams long forgotten.


Suffocating off the memories.


Brisk sunny days.


Filled with color,


life,


warmth,


and you,


apearing so unreconisable


A withering rose in my frigid world.


How cold and lingering your presence became.


But...


I still embrace you.


Hoping to bring color back into your skin.


Hoping that with just with one embrace, me and you will soar into the billowing clouds of a broken sky.


Long ago I've fallen for you.


Now it seems I'm literally falling for you.


Falling because of you.


Falling for a ghost.


Falling endlessly into a lonely pit of despair.


Falling.


Falling.


Falling.


Falling because I lack the wings to fly up and obtain you.


My pretty spanish flower.


Dont wither away.

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Raconteur
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This one is a much of an inward thinking spree, struggling for better, a definite sadness monopolizes the feel of this one, as well as a feeling of hopelessness for an inevitable futute loss.

A fine read, lovely Poetic grace, this seems to be a constant within yer work.

You did good once again.

There's much else I wanna read from yer. Almost like a good kind of curiosity.

Admittedly, it is.

Take care,

'Anna
 
Pandoraskiss
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Wow..nice work..i would say more but im kind of lost i my words
 


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