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Dreaming of a wish...

Laying here all alone holding my pillow tightly in my arms wishing it's you..
Slowly I began to rub my legs up against yours.. All while my head softly rests
on your chest, caefully I listen to the soft melow sound of your heart...
Right then I notice that every beat my heart skips it's your heart beat that replaces...
Finally I woke up only to notice that I was dreaming of a wish that would some day
come true and become reality...

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viciouscaramel88
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something i just wrote on paper tell me what you think...
 
morninglight
morninglight
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I think it's good but be carefull you don't start a fire with those legs rubbing together! : )
 
viciouscaramel88
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lol... thanks for the comment..

p.s. there was a pillow in between my legs...lol..
 
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JORGE DE CHILE
HOLA SOY JORGE DE CHILE Y BUSCO UNA RELACION SERIA CON UNA MUJER,

POR ESO QUIERO CONOCER A UNA MUJER POR ESTE MEDIO que tenga las mismas GANAS QUE YO ES FORMAR UNA FAMILIA CON AMOR Y RESPETO, TENER UNA BUENA COMUNICACION POR ESTE MEDIO, SER Honesto, sincero, QUE NO mienta, TAMBIEN QUE TENGA SUS COSAS ES CLARA LA PARTE amorosa, que el pasado LO TENGA olvidado, que quiera VIVIR EN OTRO PAIS Y HACER FAMILIA JUNTOS Claras SON LAS COSAS EN LA VIDA ...

BUENO SI TE INTERESA Y conocerme escribeme ENVIA TU IMAIL Y UNA FOTO A MI CORREO GRACIAS

JORGEFFAA3@HOTMAIL.COM
 
viciouscaramel88
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I can't read Spanish sorry didn't understand what u was trying to say so can you please translated that to English thank you for being interested in my poem thank you once again.
 
Josh Wolski
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"Right then I notice that every beat my heart skips it's your heart beat that replaces..."

That was such a taking line, Great work! : )
 


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