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Bitter end.

The first time I saw you,
I couldn't get you out of my head,
You were the one thing I wanted,
The one thing I knew I needed,
The one thing I would change for,
We both felt it,
But,
We were both taken,
And loyalties consumed us both,
We flirted,
That was all,
Showed the love we had,
The best we could,
We became friends,
Saw eachother everyday,
Feeling grew more and more,
Untill one day,
You called,
A group of people in the backround,
And you asked,
You asked the one thing I had been hopeing for,
The one question I could finally say yes to,
A bitter end became our new beggining,
We were so happy,
So full of joy,
Day after day,
My love for you grew more,
You told me you loved me,
And i knew it was true,
I felt the same way,
And for once didn't hide it,
From you,
We were so happy,
So full of joy,
'till the one day,
When you left me here,
All alone,
You never had a choice,
I never had one to,
I loved you forever,
You loved me plus two,
We tried to make it work,
the distance was pain,
The pain tried to kill us,
Slowly working at reamins,
We did our best to make it through,
But in the end,
It was unberable,
To not be able to see the one you love,
When you need them most,
It kills you,
It hurts you,
And stabs straight through,
You gave in to the pain,
Before there was nothing left,
I just wish,
That it wouldn't of been me,
You left...

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JRich20
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you write really really good.
 
devilsangel333
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this is a really good poem if this really happened to you i know exactly how you feel i have been through the same thing but you are a really good writer
 
angevil
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nice one!!!
 
abdo83
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nice job man,,kepp it up.i liek it,
 
Forsaken66
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This is really good. I like it. mkeep up the great write!
 


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