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A moment in life

The couple lay under the stars, feeling and learning,bodies entwined
Each seeking to fulfill the others lust, trapped in a love that was blind
Muttering words of love and pleasure to the other, hands grasping at the other
Finding their meaning through the other, purpose found through a lover
Panting they lay, holding the other, trying to be as close as they could
Knowing that the bond could be easily shattered, knowing it would
He closed his eyes, feeling the warmth of his body against her
Only to open his eyes, to find it all a dream, even though his body did stir
Sighing, the weight of the world falling away, leaving only the pain of his life
Frowning he pondered about all this life, what was it for, to simply endure strife?
Smiling to himself at his foolish attempts to find an answer, he surrendered again
Going back to that world of the mind, to be in her arms and forget his pain



LOL ahh I don't know what I am doing... I've met a realllllly nice girl, but we are friends and thats cool, just haven't met anyone like her before, she is just so fun ^.^ haha once again any comments would be nice, even if they are bad!

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Tippi123
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Wow. this is really good. I like all your writing. It really has meaning to it
 
hardcorechick2u
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I LOVED IT U R AMAZING
 
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it' so meaningfull i love it ...
 


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