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A Love's Promise

I look at you I can not breathe
I can’t believe this could happen to me
I close my eyes to kiss you lips
And then I feel your finger tips
On my face; and then we kiss
A kiss that caused this man's heart to miss
My heart beats fast, my hands start to sweat
This kind of love I will never forget

How could we of ever fought?
And ever sought to break our hearts?
How could I of let the one thing that makes me smile each day?
Turn around and walk away?

You’re the only girl that is for me
It doesn’t take a genius to see
my heart is yours, I’m dedicated to you
Upon the ring that I promised you
That my heart is yours and will always be
Even pass the eternities!
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IVETTEJAMIE
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nice poem
 
ShesTheLucky1
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Awwie!! maddddd adorable!
 
greeneyedgirl
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Very heart felt,,, she is one lucky girl. very nicely written.
 
Robin Brown
Robin Brown
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It's beautiful :) Who ever thsi girl is should feel lucky, great poem
 
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Paldoria and umba, everyone`s entitled to thier own opinion, but if your going to give so many -1 votes, atleast have the courage to back up your votes with some constructive comments, or better yet, have the courage that the people you vote on have and post your own work.
 
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awww cute poem.... lucky girl
 


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