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The white dove

By meliseya
08.08.2005
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	A dove in the dark, flew so well I met a boy who came from hell he stole me heart away from me and now he wants to set me free I went home crying to me bed not a word to my mother I had said my father came home late that nite he searched for me from left to rite when he found me he thought there was no hope as I was hanging by a deadly rope.when he cut me down a note had fallin to the ground it had said: "dig a whole dig it deep burry me from head to feet once your done plant a small white dove to show that I had done it all for LOVE! *Written by meliseya* Submitted by meliseya

nena

1200 days ago Reply

its a good poem nd all but tha part I dont like is the part where dis chick kills her self...why would u kill urself a guy...

Alexandra

1200 days ago Reply

boys are not worth our life! by the way good ... very good poem!

Sabrina

1200 days ago Reply

wow!those words are so strong. I loved it. the words just drove me to it.keep strong and keep going!

Valerie

1200 days ago Reply

as far as im concerned, no boys or men are worth killing yourself for. I know it takes time to get over him. but it's worth the wait cause after the wait you can learn to live and love again. the poem was strong and good though.

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