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Waiting for next time

By BrokenEmOtion
25.06.2005
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waiting


	How can I help you if you don’t speak out? How can I stop this pain? You are slowly fading away Your heart attacks your brain I know you can’t find a way out So you deface your skin The crimson rivers flow And drown your sorrow within Overdose on some damn pills And cut right to the bone Why would you want to leave me? To grieve for you all alone I want to understand, but can't if you wont allow me Don’t tell me you are fine When you see your life as debris Waiting for the next time you end up in hospital Expressionless on that bed All I can do is sit and wait Next time you may end up dead. *Written by BrokenEmOtion* Submitted by BrokenEmOtion

stephanie

1607 days ago Reply

hey, great poem
your writing technique is really unique and that's what caught me.
though I am suffering depression, I can see your frustration, and your poem helps me see what it's like to be on the other end, just trying to get in. it may feel as though you can't get through to them, and they are pushing you away, but it's harder than it seems to talk about it.
sometimes these thoughts in their mind will never change, but you can always be there for them..

keep up the good writing

BrokenEmOtion

1542 days ago Reply

You didnt even read the poem did ya eddie? :p
xxxXxxx

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