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venting-two.

an eye for an eye
a life for a life
a cut for a scar
a blade for a knife.
ruby red streams
running downhill
beg for it to cease
though it never will.
a silent scream
thats never heard
shrieking of pain
yet none hear a word.
slinking away
slinking in fear
wishing you gone,
away from here.
trouble is brewing-
that cant be ignored
watch as their bodies
fall dead to the floor.
write for venting
write for relief
write what you cant
express underneath.
scribble in anger
scribble in rage
spring like the phoenix
broke out of his cage.
hes not understanding
he doesnt see
what a silent hell
his eyes are to me


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tornheartsneverheal
tornheartsneverheal
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Dedication-dalton wright.
 
thialuvzya
thialuvzya
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incredibly written hun, like always

i wish u strength to fight through ur pain,
and lots of hugs and kisses
to comfort u through the rain,
tho ur there and i'm here,
distance will make no difference
with a friendship like ours
to hold so dear!
---written just for u,
hope it made u smile :-D
 
Zach B
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I like the way you did it - the short verses exemplify the frustration. But at the same time it's very sad, too sad...
 
tornheartsneverheal
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Considering I wrote this for my ex after he intentionally pissed me off I'm glad you caught that. :)
 
thialuvzya
thialuvzya
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i just reread this and i totally looooove it
even more!!
i know it came from a messed up situation
but this poem is AMAZING!!

"write for venting
write for relief
write what you cant
express underneath.
scribble in anger
scribble in rage
spring like the phoenix
broke out of his cage."

loooove this verse!!
 


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