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suicide my love

She smiles and walks away
Hides her tears and pretends she's okay
She just wants the pain to go away
As she sits holding her wrist
A bloody knife beside her fist
She prays tomorrow will never come
She hates what she's become
Maybe you could have done something to stop her
If you would have known you were the one
If you would have known you could take all her pain away
But you didn't known you were the one
You didn't know her heart you had won
But she thought you didn't love her
She thought no one did
You knew she had suicide thoughts in her head
But never thought she wold use the knife to take her life on the dark cold night
But she thought she'd suffer no more
As she sat there on the floor
That was the night she lost the war
The pain was no more
Perhaps no one could have taken her pain away
Or perhaps you were her savior
She had thoughts of you running through her head the night that they found her dead
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prissy
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that's beautiful. i know how that feels. please don't ever think about taking your life. no man is worth it. that's why you have friends
 
MsMoore
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I know how you feel i to think that way sometimes
 
KenAnon
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sorry im suicidal but when you write about it i know its your feelings but its also a form of attention seeking so thumbs down from me sorry nothing against you
 
cautostrophic91
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i really liked that..
 


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