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sin will cast you down

I am in the process of writing a book, one of the main characters name is valory,( not quite sure how that should be spelled but it might change) basically she starts out on the side of good, becomes the hero's lover and is tempted into lucifers control.... this is kinda  a quick poem i came up with about her and her character... kinda just helped me imagine her, so if you have any ideas or thoughts i would be glad to hear them.


 



 


(about valory, jacobs lover)


 


and crimson eyes have given you away


 


with streaks of blood running tears down your face


 


so good, so bad, you turned and walked away


 


heavens no longer your place


 


you lay to sleep among the demons


 


of all the sins greed was your poison


 


greed for power, greed for money


 


greed so sweet like tainted honey


 


pulled you in the pulled you down


 


now you vie for lucifers own crown


 


 

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brokenhere
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any comments or thoughts id love to hear them
 
xshel133x
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i kinda like this.
 


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