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poor little children.

oh,you poor little girl,
your song is never heard.
you scream your little heart out,
but no one hears a word.


oh,you poor little boy,
you smile with only your lips.
though your laughing now,
all you wish to do is hiss.


oh,you poor little children,
you swear not one soul cares.
you want someone to SEE you,
not occasionally stare.

oh,poor little girl,
you've been silent for years.
now you finally start to cry
and HE catches your tears.


oh,poor little boy,
you've never smiled with your eyes.
you've never cared for anyone....and yet....
you cant stand to see HER cry.


oh,you lucky children,
you've found matching hearts.
you intertwine you hands
and swear to never part.


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Zach B
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How Sweet! A little sappy for me but I definitely like the idea of the changing perspectives.
 
tornheartsneverheal
tornheartsneverheal
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Its to sappy for me personally either...lol.I wrote it for my best friend
 
thialuvzya
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this is really sweet!

it kinda reminds me of a nursery rhyme lol
 


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