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By blackwidow
08.04.2008
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	I sit in this empty room The darkness brings a sudden gloom My heart prepares for its ultimate doom Sitting here in this little, lonely room i don't know what I did wrong For you to just string me along Thinking what we had was strong Knowing that I was always wrong Why are you so mad at me? You said you wanted to be free? GO! Just let me be! Don't even look back at me! I'm through with you I bet you already found someone new Take yourself away cause we're through! I'm finally over you...

zaron17

149 days ago Reply

It's got emotion! The rhyming scheme is also original, haven't seen someone else do the same thing, language is nice and simple. Its a nice poem (despite the dark theme)

blackwidow

148 days ago Reply

lol you ne i dont no wat to say so excuse my speechlessness

Burney

147 days ago Reply

You are great

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