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our last night

on our last night together, you swore you'd love me always,forever.That samenight we broke apart, as did the last piece of my heart.xxx    You shouted your rage over the phone, and i swear your voice cut all the way to bone.its a shame you never saw my tears, for-if you had- you'd swear i cried years.xxx   As each tear splished and splashed away, so did all meaning- life, love, DAY.i wept tears of sorrow, of bitter dispare, because i thought you no longer cared. xxx    On  our last night together, my soul was lighter than a feather.less than an hour the phone was dead, when that light, happy feeling dropped like lead.xxx   You were so angry...i felt so alone;you were stating i was now on my own.i felt crushed with pressure,so deflated of life, that i turned to the blade of a knife.xxx   A month of silense passed slowly by, no longer did i weep or cry.i thought i was HAPPY,that id almost moved on...then,the phone rang,and i turned out to be wrong...  For on our last night together, the night we fell apart, not only did you cut to bone, carved out my heart...xxxxx keep it safe, as i respect your wish, to disappear with morning mists.

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JimGlunje
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You know, that's beautiful what you wrote! I felt the sadness and the shock and confusion and wonder what could have prompted such a sudden conflict (usually sex....I'm guessing one wished to take things slow). Breakups hurt so much when you've put your heart out on a limb for someone. But in time you will heal...that's what I meant to give you: You will heal and will find love again!

Please rearrange this poem in poem form...really, its a beautiful one!! Please don't cut or hurt yourself....your emotions are perfectly human and it's because you have a heart. Be cautious who you share it with, try to keep hopes high but expectations low.
 
lovingyou
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very nice..peom.. i had that last nite too...
 
tornheartsneverheal
tornheartsneverheal
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im sorry... do you want to talk about it? i didnt have anyone to talk to...
 
tornheartsneverheal
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...sorry.i know, the format drives me crazy too. my enter button was jammed and i freaked out... i dont cut, not any more. i realized there was no point, it wouldnt change anything... thank you.
 
pretypink21
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oh my gosh, that was great!! keep writing!
 
ZackFlak
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All I can say is that anyone that would do such a thing isn't worth keeping anyway.
 
ShelbyyGirl
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definalttly keep writing i love readin your stuff!!
 


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