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By itsjustme
09.09.2008
3 comments
I Love You
think like talk see alot difficult mind wish hard miss


	**** i think im liking you more and more each day but its wierd i dont even see you, i just talk to you ive only met you onve wich makes it more difficult i think about you alot i wish i could see you more often when i talk to you, i picture your smile you the last thing in mind when i fall asleep you wanted to kiss me, i wish you did but that would probably make it harder i miss you

jim2011

1678 days ago Reply

it has great potintial...."and" is not a good word to use in poetry all the words should be full of meaning and from the heart.
i dont even see you, i just talk -to you-
-wich makes it more difficult-"wich makes the thought more than i can bear"..
that will probly make it harder but still, i wish you did
i miss you

i would ignor me if i were u lol... because no matter what those words are beautiful because they mean somthing to you... and that is what true art is about... lol not to sound borin tho it really is good...

Phresh

1672 days ago Reply

im goin thru d same situation n yea it sukz so i kno how u felt wen u wrote diz.goo'luk wit it all tho im feelin ur poetry.

T

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