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meaningless dreams

time is passing,
yet i dont care
as i fall through
the ashen air.
all alone,again your not near,
i'll still say what you want to hear.
shadows collecting,
the darkness spreads,
yet theres nothing wrong
with these living dead.
Chorus:since the day i broke your heart,
mine has slowly fallen apart,
fading away...like our meaningless dreams....
and finally comprehending what losing you means.

tired of feeling,
of being alone,
yet her cheery name
makes me sink like a stone.
sick and tired
of the vision im seeing---
my angel of perfection,
with an unworthy being.
and now its to late to quit and die
for all our dreams were simply lies...
Chorus: Since the day my soul broke,
all lifes meaning went up in smoke.
im fading away...like our meaningless dreams.
i hope you get what losing you means.

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tornheartsneverheal
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its an experiment...any advice?i should probably stick to poems....
 
jb1550
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i cant put music to it but definatly with thoughts of music in my mind amazing job btw couldnt relate more
 
thialuvzya
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this is AMAZING torn!!
its very lyrical,
i can imagine it as a soft/rockish sort of song,
like a cross between Chris Daughtry and Nickleback.
 


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